LO4: Games Corner Script Feedback

Today my team and I will be meeting with Vicky Kirby from Sheffield Live TV; a presenter from the Games Corner in order to discuss our script and gain feed back from Vicky.

As a team we have came up with 5 questions in order to ask vicky about our script so that we can gain feedback and make improvements.

1) Do you think we covered enough news topics to keep the viewer intrested?

2) Did the new script balance well for both the presenters equally? 

3) Was the gaming news relevent  for the show and was it suitable for the target audience and genre?

4) Do you think the news we mentioned was spread out enough to cover a few different areas of the gaming genre?

5) Do we need to make any improvements to the layout, text or dialoge? 

The Meeting with Vicky:

Feedback from Vicky

(Email Vicky send me)

Hi Caitlin,

Here is feedback from your script. If you need me to elaborate on any of the answers feel free to drop me a message.

1) Do you think we covered enough news topics to keep the viewer intrested?

I do, I really enjoyed the fact that all 3 topics were different and also gaming related.


2) Did the new script balance well for both the presenters equally?

Yes I felt that it was balanced well between both presenters.

3) Was the gaming news relevent  for the show and was it suitable for the target audience and genre?

I felt all of the topics covered were relevent and is suited to all types of gamers and also is applicable to other audiences.

4) Do you think the news we mentioned was spread out enough to cover a few different areas of the gaming genre?

I really liked the topics that were picked you didn't just stick with releases or events it was mixed up well enough and covered enough to fill the slot for the show, however if you want to add more to it, think about covering a local event/development.

5) Do we need to make any improvements to the layout, text or dialoge?

The layout of the script is fine however, I would say to avoid putting in too many scenes of us laughing/asking each other questions as it takes away the 'news' feel of the segment.

Once those changes have been made I think it will be a great script.